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[e.cash] Improve copy in Core-Tech segment on home
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Authored by Kronkmeister on Sep 23 2024, 01:24.

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rABC8709248fcadf: [e.cash] Improve copy in Core-Tech segment on home
Summary

Removed redundant sentences, made explanations less ambiguous, easier to understand, and kept things birds-eye.
This also makes "Learn More" pages less redundant as you now actually learn more when going there, allowing for the core-tech segment to be more concise.

Also changed "eTokens and NFTs" back to eTokens. We did this before to have NFTs be visible. But it makes little sense to have it this way and makes the use of "eTokens" ambiguous, which doesn't fit to the rest of the copy talking about "tokens" instead. Since it is about Core-Tech, we should use "eTokens" referencing the protocol, while "tokens" and "NFTs" should be the things you can do with said protocol. It looks cleaner on the page as well. NFTs are mentioned in the explainer, which will have to suffice.

Test Plan

Visit e.cash, scroll down to Core-Tech segment.

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rABC Bitcoin ABC
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copyhome
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Build 60299: arc lint + arc unit

Event Timeline

changed back to original "Subnets" copy, with small addition.

bytesofman added a subscriber: bytesofman.

light copy suggestions, see inline

web/e.cash/components/core-tech/index.js
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This revision now requires changes to proceed.Sep 23 2024, 17:24
Kronkmeister marked 2 inline comments as done.

Applied light changes to the copy as suggested.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sep 23 2024, 22:44